高考英语专项练习之记叙文写作(含范文解析,全国统用)

1. 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是\"十年后的我\"、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文： （1）家庭 （2）工作 （3）业余生活 注意：

（1）词数100左右；

（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）开头语已为你写好

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future．______．

2. 假设你是红星中学2015届高三（1）班学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊\"英语园地\"写一篇短文，记述你和家人欢度元宵节（the Lantern Festival）的过程． 注意：1．词数不少于60.2．短文开头已给出，不计人总词数． 提示词：汤圆sweet dumpling；灯笼lantern

The Lantern Festival of this year fell on March5th． ______ ．

3. 上周日，你班开展以\"美化城市环境，倡导低碳生活\"为宗旨的志愿者活动．活动内容包括：上午去郊区植树；下午去广场宣传，分发传单．请你就这个活动为校报写一篇题为\"A Voluntary Activity\"的短文． 你的文章应包括下列要点：

活动内容、宗旨、对同学的影响以及你的评价． 注意：

1．词数：不少于100；

2．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数．

4. 成功是源于坚持不懈的努力．然而有时候努力了，你也有可能达不到预期的目标．请用英语写一篇120个词左右的短文，通过记叙你生活中的亲身经历或描述他人的故事，来谈谈你对成功的理解．

5. 作为一名中学生，你在成长的过程中会学到很多东西，如：如何有爱心、承担责任、学会感恩、择友等等．请选择一个话题，用英语描述一段经历，并说说你的想法．字数：100-120字左右． ______ ．

6. 假定你是李华，下面四幅图描绘了发生在你上学路上的一件事情，请根据图片内容用英语写一篇短

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文．

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7. 假如你是李华。上周六你和好友Tim一起乘出租车去人民公园游玩。不巧的是，到了公园以后，Tim发现他的相机不见了，翻遍了背包也没有找到。所以就认为相机落在了出租车上。于是给出租车公司联系，说明了此事。没过多久，司机就将相机送了回来，我们对司机表示了感谢。 请根据上述要点，用英文写一篇短文，给某英语报社投稿。 注意：

①. 词数：100左右；

②. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ③. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 8.

72.假设你校英语报正在举办题为My Favourite Teacher的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文， 介绍自己最喜欢的一位老师。内容包括老师的外貌、性格、教学特色以及你对老师的评价。 注意：1.词数100词左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 9.

91.假如李华是你的同学，最近他很不开心，因为他和父母之间有一些分歧。请根据以下提供的内容用英语写一篇短文。

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1.数学和语文学得很好，英语和物理比较难，学习压力大。 李华的烦2.父母不理解，觉得他每门功课都应该是班上最好的，还经常看他的日记。 恼 3. 周末想看电视，父母除了学习，什么都不让他做。 4. 现在对学习不感兴趣。 你的建（至少二条） 议 注意：

1. 短文应包括所提供的所有内容，也可以适当发挥。 2. 词数：150词左右。开头已给出，不算入总词数。

My classmate, Li Hua, feels unhappy recently, for he disagrees with his parents about what he should do or what he shouldn’t do.

10. 某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动．请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1．你最喜欢的季节；

2．你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受…）． 注意：

1．词数100左右； 2．题目已为你写好； 3．行文连贯，语篇完整； 4．文中不得透露个人真实信息．

11. 假设你是红星中学高三 (一)班的学生李华．你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动．请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程． 注意：词数不少于60． 提示词：地球日 Earth Day

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12. 作为新一届的高三学子，我们即将向自己的大学梦发起冲刺。那么，你梦想的大学是哪一所呢？请用英文写一篇短文，词数100左右，内容包括： 1.你梦想的大学； 2.你喜欢该大学的两条理由（如：专业设置，教学成就，校园景色，历史文化……）。

My Dream University

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Paul was a successful businessman. He had been on the road visiting people for more than a month without going home. He couldn’t wait to get back to see his wife and children. It was coming up on Mother’s Day, and he usually tried to make it “back home”, but this year he was just too busy and too tired. The day when he was driving in a small town, he saw a flower shop. He said to himself, “I know what I will do, I’ll send my mother some roses. ” He stopped and went into the flower shop and saw a young man talking to the girl in it. “How many roses can I get for five dollars, Ms.?” the boy asked. The girl was trying to explain that roses were expensive. Maybe the young man would be happy with something else. “No. I have to have roses,” he said, “my mom was sick so much last year and I didn’t get to spend much time with her. I want to get something special. It has to be red roses, because that is her favorite. ”He was stubborn. The girl in the shop looked up at Paul and was just shaking her head. Something inside of Paul was touched by the boy’s voice. He wanted those roses so badly. Paul looked at the girl and silently said that he would pay for the boy’s roses.

The girl looked at the young man and said, “Okay, I will give you a dozen red roses for your dollars. ”The young man almost jumped into the air. He took the flowers and ran outside. It was worth over fifty dollars just to see that kind of excitement.

Paul ordered his own flowers and asked the girl to have it delivered to his mother. After that, with a relief he drove

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down the road. Not long after his driving, he saw the boy walking to a graveyard (坟地). 注意：

1 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1:

Paul stopped his car and followed the young

man. Paragraph 2:

Paul went into the car in

tears. 14. 将下面5个句子按括号内要求翻译并连成一篇微作文。

1. 众所周知莫言是第一位获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国人（it 作形式主语；the Nobel Literature Prize）。 2. 他在农村长大, 这对他的生活和写作产生了很大的影响（非性定语从句；have an effect on）。 3. 在三十多岁时被一所大学录取，这使他实现梦想成为可能（admit；it作形式宾语）。 4. 正是他的投入和努力才使他最终取得了巨大的成就（强调句）。 5. 说实话，我从心底敬佩莫言（to be honest）。

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15. 为庆祝父亲节，你班开展了“尊敬父母”的主题班会活动，请据所提供信息写一篇英文报道。 宗旨 让每位学生都理解父母，尊重父母。 现象 大多数同学都是独生子女，只看重自己，不顾及父母。 1. 送一份自制的礼物给父母； 2. 记住父母的生日，并表达祝愿； 要求 3. 父母下班回家时主动打招呼； 4. 离家出门前向父母告知去向。 效果 1. 收到班主任的表扬； 弟5页 （共20页）

2. 同学们增加了尊敬父母的意识。 写作要求：

1. 短文要连贯，不要逐字翻译； 2. 字数150左右。标题不计入字数。 Showing Respect for Our Parents 16. 书面表达

请按以下提示，以An outstanding woman scientist为题，写一篇人物传记，介绍居里夫人。提示： 1.玛丽·居里(Marie Curie)于1867年出生于波兰华沙，从小对学习有着浓厚的兴趣。 2.玛丽的妈妈和大姐在她不满10岁时就相继病逝了。

3.玛丽·居里靠自学考取巴黎大学。毕业后，有许多重大的科学发现。 4. 1903和1911年，居里夫人分别获得了诺贝尔物理学奖和化学奖。 5. 1934年7月14日，居里夫人病逝。 词数：100左右。

参考词汇：华沙Warsaw 波兰Poland 巴黎大学Paris University.诺贝尔物理学奖the Nobel Prize for physics An outstanding woman scientist

17. 假如你们学校英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 你最喜欢的季节；

2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受……）。 注意：

1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好；3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。 18. 书面表达（满分25分）

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请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇关于作家莫言的简介，然后投给校英语报。 2 写作内容需包含以上要点，语言通顺流畅。

原名 管谟业 出生时间 1955年2月17日 出生地 山东省高密县(county) 童年时莫言在家乡的小学读书，后来出于某种原因辍学，在农村劳动多年。 1986年莫言发表了中篇小说《红高梁》(Red Sorghum)，后来这部小说被导演 主要经历 (director)张艺谋拍成了电影。 【答案】

2011年，长篇小说《蛙》(Frog)获茅盾文学(literature)奖。 2012年，莫言获诺贝尔文学奖，成为首位获此奖项的中国籍作家。 1.

【小题1】I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight 注意：1. 词数100左右。

years old by then．I will have my own family．Probably with a lovely child．I hope I 2．可以适当适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get 【小【小along well with my colleagues，I will do a good job in whatever I do．In my free time，题2】题3】19. 根据下面提供的情况，用英语写一篇介绍华罗庚教授的短文。词数：120左右。 I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball 略 略 1、 出生于1910年；

games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．

2、 少时家贫，中学只读了三年，15岁离校；

3、 当店员，自学数学，几年后写了一篇文章指出了某教授所著书中的错误； 2. 20

3. A Voluntary Activity

4、 1931年，清华大学请他去任教并研究数学；

Last Sunday，our class launched a voluntary activity，the theme of which is tomake the city more 5、 20世纪40年代，英国和美国的大学相继请他去任教；

beautiful and advocate a low-carbon lifestyle．【高分句型】（宗旨）In the morning，we went to plant trees inthe suburbs．We worked in cooperation．Some dug holes，some carried and planted trees，6、 新中国成立后，他积极参加社会主义建设，帮助工农，关心青年； and some watered them．In the afternoon，we went to People's Square to hand out leaflets，raising 7、 1985年，他在作数学演讲时逝死。他把毕生的精力献给了数学研究事业。 people's awarenessof environmental protection．【高分句型】（活动内容） Most of the students think highly of theactivity，which will surely produce a positive effect on our daily life．【高分句型】需用的词和短语 liberation devote one’s life to 把毕生精力献给、、、 （评价）

20. 请根据表格的内容写一篇关于你去美术馆观展的短文,注意人称和时态。

As far as I'm concerned，it's everyone's duty to protect the environment．As long as there is thepossibility of saving our planet，do take action now before it is too late．【高分句型】Low carbon living is surely a way of great significance．（结尾-总结）． 4. No doubt everyone hopes to be successful．However，this doesn't always happen as expected．For example，I can still remember the sports meet in middle school，in which I took part in the 800-meter race．【高分句型】At first I thought I could not finish such a long distance for I had no talent for sports．But I decided to practice running every day．Months of hard work rewarded me with the third place．Although I was not the first one，I finished the race．To me this was a success．（记叙生活中的亲身经历）

Personally，process is more important than result．As long as we have done our best in the process，we won't feel sorry for ourselves though the result is not so satisfactory．（【高分句型】对成功的理解）

5. A good friend can be our reliable companion while with a bad one we may easily get lost．I've learned this from my own experience．Once before a test

，my friend Joy and I came into the classroom，where several classmates gathered 要求：1 字数为120字左右。

around，writing something excitedly．I was shocked when one of them told us secretly，\"My friend

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in another class finished the test yesterday．I'll share you the right answers!\"I tried to find any signs of shame on her face but failed．I refused her\"generous\"offer when Joy patted me on the shoulder，whispering，\"We needn't follow them．\"

To my understanding，friends，like books，if well chosen，will greatly benefit us．Never should we keep bad company．

6. I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground．I quickly ran over to help her up and asked her what waswrong with her．She told me she slipped and fell due to heart trouble．I was worried and decided totake her to a hospital．And then I went to a department store near the hospital and contactedher family．Soon her son and daughter came to the hospital．They thanked and praised mefor my kindness by writing me a thank-you Li Hua does well in Maths and Chinese, while he finds English and physics difficult to learn. He is under great pressure from studies. However, his parents don’t understand him and insist that he should be the best at every subject in his class. What’s more, they often read his diaries. Besides, he feels like watching TV at weekends, but his parents allow him to do nothing but study. Worst of all, he’s so annoyed that he shows no interest in his study at all.

I think,first of all,he should communicate with his parents,telling them his trouble.And he should cheer up as soon as possible,working hard to quality himself for a job in the future.Additionally,he’d better turn to his teachers for advice and make a plan on how to improve his English and physics. letter．Although I was late for school today，I felt very proud of what Ihad done． 7.

Last Saturday, Tim and I paid a visit to People's Park. We went there by taxi. Unfortunately, on arriving there, Tim found his camera missing. Having searched the backpack, we still couldn't find it. Thus, we assumed that it must have been left in the taxi driving us there. We got in touch with the taxi company and told them what had happened. As we expected, it didn't take long before the driver sent the camera back. He insisted that we check the camera and told us to be more careful in future. We expressed our sincere thanks to the driver. What an interesting day and how nice the driver is! 8.

One possible version:

My Favourite Teacher

I have had many teachers in my life, but Mr / Miss, my previous/present … teacher, is my favourite.

Mr. / Miss … is tall and thin. It is said that he / she is in his / her late forties, but he / she looks very young. He / She is always so kind to us students that he / she is just like our father / mother. He / She has different ways of teaching in class, so we find his / her class lively and interesting. He / She always encourages us to speak English in class and never be afraid of making mistakes. Thanks to his / her excellent teaching, I have made rapid progress in my English. Mr. / Miss. … is such a good teacher that we all respect him / her very much. In fact, he / she is considered as one of the most popular teachers in my school. 9.

My classmate, Li Hua feels unhappy recently, for he disagrees with his parents about what he should do or what he shouldn’t do.

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The Season I like Best

Autumn is my favourite season among the seasons of the year．It is neither too cold nor too hot in this season．（天气）【高分句型一】The second reason I like Autumn most is that I can enjoy beautiful scenery in this season．Leaves are dancing and the sky is high and blue as if you could never reach the ceiling of it．（景色）【高分句型二】Last but not the least，I can't help to tell you that my birthday is in Autumn．In my birthday，I would like to invite many friends to have a birthday party．I am a party animal．Social activities inspire me for I can get more life experience from my friends．For example，one of my friend told me that she has been to Mexico where I am always expecting to go． 11.

Actions for a Greener Earth

A week before Earth Day，posters were put up around our school，calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth．（时间，交代事件） Our class came up with the idea of making better use of used materials．We brought to our classroom worn﹣out clothes，pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls，handbags，tissue boxes and small vases．That weekend，we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there．All were very happy with those unexpected gifts，especially little kids and elderly people．【高分句型一】We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school．【高分句型二】（活动内容及成果） We are very proud of what we did at that weekend and believe we could do more for a better world．（活动意义） 12. 略

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13. 第二节：读后续写 Paragraph 1：

Paul stopped his car and followed the young man.The young man went up to a small monument, and knelt down. He carefully put the flowers before it and began to sob. “Dear mom, I love you. How I regret I didn't tell it when you were with me. I knew you loved roses, but I never sent you the flowers. Now, you have gone to another world. How I regret I didn't tell you I love you so much!” Paragraph 2

Paul went into the car in tears. His mother's home wasn't far from here, but he didn't see her for too long a time. He didn't have a talk with her and say how much he loved her for so long a time. He turned the car and drove towards the road quickly to the flower shop. He asked the girl to give back the flowers because he wanted to send them personally to his mom. 14.

It is well-known that Mo Yan is the first Chinese to win the Nobel Literature Prize. Mo Yan was brought up in a village, which had a great effect on his life and writing. In his thirties, Mo Yan was admitted to a university, which made it possible to realize his dream. It is his devotion and efforts that make him achieve great success. To be honest, I admire Mo Yan from the bottom of my heart. 15.

Showing Respect for Our Parents

In celebration of Mother's Day, we had a class meeting aiming to let everyone respect and be considerate of his parents, with the theme of Showing Respect for Our Parents. Showing respect for parents is one of the Chinese traditional virtues. However, as most of us students today are the only child in our family, we often regard ourselves as the center of the family, without caring much about our parents. Therefore, we held the class meeting, in which we worked out some dos that we should follow, such as giving presents made by ourselves to parents, remembering parents birthdays and expressing our good wishes to them, saying hello to parents when they return home after work, telling parents where we go when we leave home, and so on. After the meeting, we were thought highly of by our class teachers and we enhanced awareness of respecting our parents. 16.

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Marie Curie was born in Warsaw, Poland in 1867. When she was a child, she showed great interest in her lessons. However, she was not as lucky as the other children of her age. Her eldest sister died of illness shortly after her motherˈs death when she was less than ten years old. Life was very hard for her at that time, but she was getting stronger and stronger. She taught herself all her lessons and finally she was admitted into Paris University.

After graduation, she made many important scientific discoveries. In 1903 she won the Nobel Prize for physics and eight years later, she won it for chemistry. Marie Curie died of illness on July 14, 1934. 17. 略

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Mo Yan, whose real name is Guan Moye, was born on February 17th, 1955 in Gaomi County,Shandong Province. He is one of the well-known writers in China. As a child, he studied in a primary school in his hometown and later he had to drop out of school for some reason and worked as a farmer for many years. Mo Yan began to write at a young age. In 1986, his novel Red Sorghum was published and later it was made into a film directed by Zhang Yimou. In 2011, Mo Yan won the Mao Dun literature Prize for his novel Frog.

In 2012, Mo Yan became the first Chinese citizen to win the Nobel Prize in Literature. This great achievement shows the world's recognition of China's contemporary literature. He has set a good example to us all and we all admire him very much. 19.

Born in 1910, Hua Luogeng had only three years' middle school education, because his family was very poor. At the age of 15, he had to leave school and worked in a shop as a salesman. At the same time, he studied math on his own. A few years later, he wrote an article to point out some mistakes in a book written by a professor.

In 1931, Hua Luogeng was invited to tsinghua university to work as a professor and researcher in maths. Then he was invited by British and American universities to teach math in the 1940s. After the liberation, he took an active part in socialist construction. He helped workers and farmers and cared about the youth.

Hua Luogeng died when he was making a speech on maths in1985. He devoted his life to maths study.

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I heard that there was an art exhibition in our city, so several classmates and I took a bus to the City Gallery to see it last Sunday afternoon. Some paintings were painted in the classical style while others were painted in the modern style. We saw many famous paintings, such as Xu Beihong's typical paintings of horses and the shrimps by Qi Baishi. Some Cubist paintings by Western artists were on display 1．注意故事的链接框架，例如\"Last Tuesday…First…Then…Finally…\"

2．注意图片主要细节．图一，我和爷爷奶奶包汤圆，爸爸妈妈煮汤圆．图二，全家人一起晚餐．图三，全家人观赏元宵灯会．图四，全家人观赏满月．

3．注意总结全文．如我希望明年元宵节继续进行这样的活动，\"I hope we can continue these activities on the next Lantern Festival!\" 重点短语与句：

1．fall on 适逢（某日），正当（某日）． 2．in the preparation of 为…做准备．

as well. There were also many other paintings and styles.

Although I didn't understand all of the paintings, I really appreciated fine art home and abroad. After the experts explained them to us, I began to feel crazy about them. Especially, Xu Beihong's work, named Racing Horse, is my favorite. 【解析】

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I often imagine what my life will be like in the future．

I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family．Probably with a lovely child．（家庭）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues，I will do a good job in whatever I do．【高分句型】（工作） In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．（业余生活）

本文是应用文，根据所给要点给英语报社写篇征文，主题是\"十年后的我\"，主要要点：（1）家庭（2）工作（3）业余生活．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第一人称为主．时态以一般将来时为主．重要短语：What is sb/sth like？（某人/物怎么样？…），in the future （将来），get along well with（与…相处融洽），in one's free time （在某人空闲时间），take regular exercise （有规律地锻炼），around the world （全世界）． 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．

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The Lantern Festival of this year fell on March 5th．On that day after school，I hurried back home to join in the preparation of the big family feast．（介绍元宵节以及为此做准备）Grandparents taught me how to make sweet dumplings while Dad and Mom made dishes．Then came the grandest dinner time．We all agreed that homemade dumplings tasted much sweeter．We chatted happily，enjoying the family togetherness． After the dinner，we went to the park to appreciate the beautiful lanterns，the highlight of this festival．Two huge dragon lanterns especially amazed us and we couldn't help flashing our cameras．Walking in the park and admiring the beautiful moon，we felt we were so lucky to have each other as a family and valued the time we spent together．（介绍元宵节我们做了哪些事） What a fantastic lantern festival!（感想）

这是一篇记叙文，让我们写一篇根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊\"英语园地\"写一篇短文，记述你和家人欢度元宵节（the Lantern Festival）的过程．写作时用第一人称，用一般过去时．内容要点：图片故事叙述作文要求把握故事脉络并把每幅图的重要细节表述清楚．

弟13页 （共20页） 3．Then came the grandest dinner time．然后是伟大的晚餐时间到了．副词放在句首，句子要全部倒装．表示对晚餐是多少的盼望．

4．we couldn't help flashing our cameras．我们情不自禁的照相．couldn't help+doing是情不自禁的做么事的意思．

5．Walking in the park and admiring the beautiful moon，we felt we were so lucky to have each other as a family． 走在公园里和享受着美丽的月亮，我们觉得我们是如此幸运能有彼此这样一个家庭．Walking 分词短语作状语，这样的结构是提分的．Walk与后面的主语we是主动的关系，所以用现在分词．

6．What a fantastic lantern festival!多么美妙的元宵节！What引导的感叹句结尾，what_不定冠词+形容词+主语！．

写作命题作文时要先审好题，叙述好事情．注意时态与人称，运用好句型与短语．文章要包含所有的要点．连接词要学会运用，写好后要检查，与修改语法．时间多的话可以在草稿纸上写打草稿．

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本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，以\"A Voluntary Activity\"为题，写一篇以美化城市环境，倡导低碳生活为宗旨的短文．写作要点包括：1．活动内容：上午去郊区植树；下午去广场宣传，分发传单．2．宗旨； 3．对同学的影响以及你的评价． 写作时应以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．重要短语：launch a voluntary activity （开展志愿者活动），advocate a low-carbon lifestyle （提倡低碳生活），hand out （分发），raise people's awareness of （提高人们的意识），think highly of （高度赞扬），produce a positiveeffect on （有积极影响），as long as （只要），There is thepossibility of …（有…的可能性），take action（采取行动）．

提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．

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本文是开放性作文，根据所给提示，阐述对成功的理解，以此为话题进行思维和联想，自由发挥并结合具体事例，写一篇短文．在写作时以第一人称为主，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主．重要短语：（There is）no doubt that （毫无疑问），take part in …（参加），have no talent for（在…没有才能），practice doing （练习做某事），as long as（只要），do one's best （尽力），feel sorry for（对…感到抱歉）．

开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．

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A good friend can be our reliable companion while with a bad one we may easily get lost．【高分句型】I've learned this from my own experience．（引出话题）

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Once before a test，my friend Joy and I came into the classroom，where several classmates gathered around，writing something excitedly．【高分句型】I was shocked when one of them told us secretly，\"My friend in another class finished the test yesterday．I'll share you with the right answers!\"I tried to find any signs of shame on her face but failed．I refused her\"generous\"offer when Joy patted me on the shoulder，whispering，\"We needn't follow them．\"【高分句型】（举例） To my understanding，friends，like books，if well chosen，will greatly benefit us．【高分句型】Never should we keep bad company．【高分句型】（总结升华）

本文是开放式作文．在成长的过程中会学到很多东西，如：如何有爱心、承担责任、学会感恩、择友等等，根据所给信息选择一个话题写一篇短文．写作要点：描述一段经历，阐述想法．写作时人称用第一和第三人称．时态应该用一般现在时和一般过去时．重要短语：reliable companion （值得信赖的同伴），get lost （迷失），share sth with sb （与…分享某物），pat sb on the shoulder （拍某人的肩膀），keep sb company （陪伴某人），learn sth from （从…中学会．）． 类似这种开放式作文可遵循以下写作步骤：首段：议论，引出主题，点出观点．第二段：记叙文段落，举例子．第三段：议论，总结升华观点，回应开头．同时写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．

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I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old womanwith a walking stick lying on the ground．【高分句型】（Picture 1 上学路上看到摔倒在路上的老人）

I quickly ran over to helpher up and asked her what was wrong with her．She told me she slipped and fell due to heart trouble．（Picture 2 主动扶起老人并询问情况）

I was worried and decided to take her toa hospital．And then I went to a department store near the hospital and contactedher family．（Picture 3 送老人到医院并等待其家人）

Soon her son and daughter came to the hospital．They thanked and praised mefor my kindness by writing me a thank-you letter．（Picture 4 老人的家人赶到并对我的善举表示感谢） Although I was late forschool today，I felt very proud of what I had done．【高分句型】（感想） 本文是图画类作文，要求根据四幅图的先后顺序描述上学路上发生的一件事．

在写作时，人称以第一和第三人称为主．时态以一般过去时为主．根据情景的发展，抓住细节按顺序安排好材料．

重要短语：catch sight of（看见），lie on the ground （躺在路上），run over（跑过去 ），due to（由于），heart trouble （心脏病），decide to do （决定做），contact sb（联系某人），praised sb for sth（因…而赞扬某人），be late for（迟到）．

【高分句型】

1．I was walking to school this morning when I caught sight of an old woman with a walking stick lying on the ground．

①这里用了固定句型\"sb was/were doing when+另一个动作\"，某人正在做某事，就在此时又发生了另一个动作．我正在上学的路上，就在此时看到了拄着拐杖的老妇人正躺在路上．

②现在分词lying作an old woman的后置定语，表示动作正在进行．相当于定语从句an old woman who was lying on the ground．

2．Although I was late for school today，I felt very proud of what I had done．

这里是由although引导的让步状语从句，逗号之后是主句．虽然我上学迟到了，但觉得很自豪．

写作看图作文时，首先认真看图，结合图片和文字，确定所要表达的主题是什么，然后围绕主题，提炼要点，合理想象，对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词使表达连贯．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型． 7.

第15页/共20页 此文的要点都给出来了，审题时注意，要包含题目所提示的内容，要把要点写全，不能遗漏，但不能逐字逐句的翻译，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用多种句式，准确表述。 亮点：

定语从句：As we expected, it didn't take long before the driver sent the camera back. 感叹句：What an interesting day and how nice the driver is!

非谓语动词做状语：Having searched the backpack, we still couldn't find it.

虚拟语气：He insisted that we check the camera and told us to be more careful in future. 8.

这是一篇提纲类书面表达，但是文章的要点不是很具体，包括老师的外貌、性格、教学特色以及你对老师的评价。要考生自己充实内容，这就要求考生自己拓展发挥，在写作的过程中，注意人称，时态和主谓一致这些问题。还要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。可以合适使用连接词，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。

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这是一篇提示详细的作文。李华的烦恼一共有4点，要注意不要有遗漏，也不要逐句翻译，要有连接词适当连接起来。第二部分，个人建议要先想好，一定要理有据。

动笔前首先要认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作时应注意描述的全面性，不要遗漏要点。结合材料内容可知，本文主要是第三人称，用一般现在时。语言的描述应符合语法结构，造句应符合英语的习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

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本文为英文报投稿．话题为“The Season I Like Best”．人称主要为第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时．写作要点为：1．你最喜欢的季节；2．你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受…）． 重点词汇及短语：

neither…nor..既不…也不… like sth most 最喜欢… ceiling 穹顶，天花板

last but not the least 最后但并非不重要的 party animal 聚会狂 social activities 社交活动 inspire激励 as if 好像

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高分句型： 句型一：

It is neither too cold nor too hot in this season． neither…nor…既不…也不… 句型二：

Leaves are dancing and the sky is high and blue as if you could never reach the ceiling of it． 12.

这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外，还要阐述自己的观点，这就要求考生根据所给提示信息自己拓展发挥，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举理由的时候要使用合适的连接词如：first，second，besides，what's more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

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读后续写，简言之，就是阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后，根据要求和提示把这篇文章未写完部分补充完整，使之浑然一体。它一方面很好地考查学生对所学语言知识的实际运用能力，而另一方面，它也培养学生的发散as if 就好像是…，这里表示“天空很蓝很高，好像你不可能够着的天花板．”

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作文要求为一篇与环保相关的英文报道类稿件．主题是“Actions for a Greener Earth”．写作时人称主要为第三人称为主，写作时态以一般过去时为主．写作要点：1，参加人员；2，时间；3，活动内容及成果；4，活动意义．

重要短语及词汇： Earth Day 地球日 come up with 想到 used materials 废弃材料 worn﹣out clothes 破旧衣物 give away 分发，派发 unexpected 意想不到的 be proud of…为……而感到骄傲 高分句型： 句型一

All were very happy with those unexpected gifts，especially little kids and elderly people． especially 副词，表示特别是…

句型二

We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school．

“so…that…”如此…以至于……，that引导结果状语从句

弟17页 （共20页） 思维能力。学生在续写文章时，要注意续写部分“与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度”，“内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况”，“应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性”以及“上下文的连贯性”。读后续写有如下特点：

（1）读后续写不是随心所欲，是要在引导语（开头语）和提示词的帮助下完成续写部分。这些关键词语类似于传统写作中的要点提示，但是不同点在于这些关键词语并不是全用。另外，所续写部分不能脱离各自段落的首句开头语，即：不能另起炉灶。这些开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，在某种程度上引导你的思路向哪方面发展。

（2）续写短文多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。这样学生能够根据提示词语，顺着原来文章的思路续写文章，并适当发散。

（3）读后续写要求读写并重。与阅读理解题一样，读后续写同样需要对本篇文章精确理解，这样所续写部分才不至于偏离主题，就这方面而言有点类似阅读理解题中对文章后续发展的推断，如“Whatwould happen next?”。

（4）所给文章的未完部分的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的，学生可以根据自己对文章的理解，从而对文章的结尾有不同的诠释。

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这是一篇人物介绍，他的事迹都是他经历过的事情，故而我们应该主要用一般过去时来描述莫言的情况，描述的过程中要注意要点齐全。 注意每句话的固定句型的使用： 1.It is well-known that…众所周知

2.指代前面一句话的非性定语从句的，又在定语从句中充当主语的成分时，关系词要用which，而不用that。

3.be admitted to…被……录取

4.强调句句式：it is/was+被强调部分+that+句子的其它成分

5.from the bottom of one's heart打从某人心底。to be honest说实话。 每句评分标准：

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1. 结构正确，信息完整，给满分（3分）；

2. 结构正确，信息基本完整，但有一个或两个拼写错误（或时态错误），给2分； 3. 结构正确，信息有遗漏，给2分；

4. 结构不正确，但写出部分重要信息（词汇），给1分； （用不同于参的译文，但意思准确，给满分）

与其它题材相比，人物介绍显得比较平淡，写得不好往往给人以枯燥乏味的感觉，但是如果文字组织得好，篇章结构安排合理，介绍信息引人入胜，文章也可以成为一篇佳作。根据文字提示可以确定：写作主要人称为第三人称，字数120左右，体裁为记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主。写作时注意避免语法毛病。行文时注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，适当使用连接词。

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本题是要求学生写一篇参观美术馆后的短文。考生应该用自己最有把握的句型、单词、短语去表达，句式不要单一，要形式多样，要使用恰当的连词，使句与句之间，段与段之间过渡自然。在写作过程中牢牢记住以下口诀：“先读提示，要点与格式要弄清；时态语态要当心，前后呼应要一致，结构搭配莫违背；文章写好细检查，点滴小错别忽视”。考生在明确目的和掌握要领后，认真完成作文。 15.

提纲类书面表达要涵盖提纲中所提到的所有内容，同时要注意理顺要点，防止遗漏。同时我们要注意语意连贯、逻辑清晰，要有自然的过渡词、过渡句。同时要注意一些词汇和短语的表达，如：为了庆祝父亲节，用 in celebration of；尊重父母用 show respect for。要注意时态和语态，描述过去的事件要用一般过去时，如

had a class meeting、had a good effect 、were praised等。

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本文要求介绍居里夫人，根据要点：1.玛丽·居里(Marie Curie)于1867年出生于波兰华沙，从小对学习有着浓厚的兴趣。2.玛丽的妈妈和大姐在她不满10岁时就相继病逝了。3.玛丽·居里靠自学考取巴黎大学。毕业后，有许多重大的科学发现。 4. 1903和1911年，居里夫人分别获得了诺贝尔物理学奖和化学奖。5. 1934年7月14日，居里夫人病逝。文章写作时要使用一般过去时态为主，人称使用第三人称单数，要点不能遗漏，而且要按提示的时间顺序来进行写作。同时要用最有把握的、经典的单词、短语和句型。写的过程中，多注意灵活使用非谓语动词、定语从句等高级表达形式，以使文章增色，增加文采。

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这是一篇提纲类书面表达，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。除了表达这些要点以外，还要阐述自己的观点，这就要求考生根据所给提示信息自己拓展发挥，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举理由的时候要使用合适的连接词如：first，second，besides，what's more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

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这是一篇文字提示类作文。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇关于作家莫言的简介，然后投给校英语报。提示把莫言的情况交代的比较清楚，只要翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加过渡词和连接词就不难写出一篇好文章。审题确定时态为一般现在时，人称用第三人称。注意上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。 注意：1. 词数100左右。

2．可以适当适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

范文亮点：高级句型：Mo Yan, whose real name is Guan Moye, was born on February 17th, 1955 in Gaomi County,Shandong Province. 使用了非性定语从句。 高级词汇和短语：drop out of，set a good example to等。 19.

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